Unit 6 Feedback

Hi Kristy,

Thank you for your work on your website section. I found your section very informative and very relatable. Your section had the three basic elements required in this assignment with the correct number of graphics that were appropriate to your topic area. I felt as if your writing style was easily understood. However, I noticed during the section where you discussed the top apps, some sentences were complete and others were not. I would suggest using complete sentences here or using fragments only as a list instead of the combination of the two. I think the information provided can be used by healthcare providers, especially those who may not directly work with adolescent females. As an occupational therapist, this is something I could assist a client in learning to utilize in her daily routine if she was having issues related to her menstrual cycle and tracking and wanted to address this concern. Although your age group is late adolescence, I do believe the information you provided here can be expanded to women in their reproductive years.  I like your section that explains why women use these trackers. I think it gives healthcare providers a better understanding of their clients. I also think that clients and healthcare providers can have more accurate conversations with the use of the data from the tracker.