Kristy

Hi Julie and Kristy, I think that you’ve done a really nice job of organizing your information and making it clear, well articulated, and aesthetic.  The videos and visuals you’ve selected are great, all very appropriate.  The style of writing you’ve integrated is clear and concise.   If I were going to emphasize any one thing to help improve this page, I would advocate for more information.  There is such an enormous body of literature available to pull from as many research studies on body image and protective factors are conducted throughout college campuses, utilizing quantitative and qualitative data from this age group. And while we tend to think of early adolescents as being a markedly volatile time period for young women, as women leave the family unit and increase personal freedoms and self-identity, this can also be an extremely tumultuous time in a young woman’s life.  If I were consuming this information from th...